Just the tonic

You guys are amazing.  Every time I start having doubts about whether I'm cut out to be a proper author, or the task ahead seems too daunting, you always manage to offer words of encouragement that makes me realise that I'm not the only one who gets this mindset.

I've had another look at my MS today with fresh eyes, and now, it all seems clear.  I can still see the issues, but I can see that the changes are making it tighter.

I think that part of the cause was that when I write, it floods out, and I don't really concentrate too hard on it as it all seems to be formed and waiting to be typed.  I can see the progress very clearly.  The problem with editing, is that you are scrutinising every word, sentence, and paragraph.  It's slow going, and I lose sight of any reference points to what reads well.

Like I said.  You guys help me re-gain some perspective. :o)

I also received the Blog on Fire award from Abby.  I'll put the entry up for this tomorrow, it's a bit mad at the moment, and I can't think of 7 facts that are even remotely interesting.

An up hill struggle

For once, I found that I had some free time this weekend.  If you're like me, then free time is more rare than a rare thing that's really rare. (or something like that)
What to do with this spare time was a no brainer.  It's uninterrupted editing time. 
There were still things that cropped up which managed to interrupt the flow, but I managed to side step majority of these.  The main problem I had while editing, was that I could see the faults, but didn't really know if the changes I was making were making it any better.
Am I just re-writing the sentence in another passive way?  Is the story any stronger with the amendments?  The more I thought about this, the more the doubts crept in. 
In the end, I had to stop.
Maybe I just need to make the changes, and then look at them afterwards, and see how it reads then. 
Maybe I'll surprise myself.

Mental Credit Crunch?

I was in a conversation with a friend the other day, and he referred to someone as being 'intellectually bankrupt'.  Liking the phrase, I noted it down for future reference.

 

I can't seem to find a sensible plot path for the middle of my new book idea.  (Yes, I know that this appears to be a change in subject matter, but bear with me, the relevant bit is just coming up.) I have come to the conclusion that I must currently be Intellectually overdrawn. :o|

Shocked and stunned.

I feel very honoured (and slightly mystified) to have been given a Blog Award by Erin.  Thank you!!!

I've only been blogging for a little over a month, and thought that these things were for the seasoned blogger who's 'been around the blog' a couple of times.

Looks like I'm going to have to find a virtual DIY shop so that I can get a virtual shelf to place it on :o)

 

 

 

The award rules are:

1. Thank and link to the person who nominated me. (Done. But think I'll do it again.  It's Erin Summerill)

2. Share seven random facts about myself.

3. Pass the award along to 5 newfound blogging buddies

4. Contact those buddies to congratulate them.

 

Oh blimey!  Seven facts… Ok, here goes:

 

1) I belong to an Amateur Drama Group.  We've just finished a small tour of  'Allo 'Allo. 

It's a wartime spoof set in France.  I played Herr Flick of the Gestapo.

 

2) I used to do trampolining competitions.  I can still do double somersaults with twists but I ache like hell the next day!

 

4) I received confirmation last week that I have a place in next years London Marathon.  Initially I was excited, but then I realised that I'll have to start training. (Where was number three?)

 

5) I first met my best friend when I was five years old on the first day of school.  I had an argument with the teacher about adding up numbers. ( I said I could do it, she said I couldn't and wanted me to add up pictures.)  The end result was that I was sent out of the classroom.  Bill was already out there, having been kicked out for some other offense.  We've been firm friends for the subsequent forty two years!

 

3) (Ah! Here it is!) I once made a crop circle in my friends lawn with his sit-on lawn mower.  It took two years to grow out.

 

6) I can say the longest place name in the world: Taumatawhakatangihangakoauauotamateapokaiwhenuakitanatahu

It was used in a song called The Lone Ranger, and it charted in the UK in the late seventies.  There was an interview with the singer, and he said it slowly.  I taped it, and learnt it.  My kids never tire of me saying it to their friends.  No, really!!

In case you are wondering, it's in New Zealand, and means: The summit where Tamatea, the man with the big knees, the climber of mountains, the land-swallower who travelled about, played his nose flute to his loved one.

 

7) I'm afraid of heights.  I mean really afraid.  It's a big relief that I'm not that tall, as I don't think I would cope very well.  Driving over bridges gives me the willies, and if I'm up a hill and I can't see the ground running all the way down (because of the brow of the hill gets in the way), then I get very cranky.

 

Now for the Five newfound blogging buddies (in no particular order):

1) So You're A Writer - I love Carrie's take on things.  She always does great posts.

2) Something To Write About - A fellow chocoholic.  Go check her site out. 

3) Get Bust Writing - Emily has some brilliant guest posts on Mondays.

4) Alexi Bass Writes About Writing - A great blog.  The Friday Five's are worth looking out for.

5) Will Write For Cookies - Peggy's posts always make me re-think things.  I always feel inspired after reading her latest posts.

I just want to say thank you all for making me feel very welcome and a part of the Blogsphere :o)

Editing order?

I’m always unsure what areas to tackle first when I start to editing my MS.  If I get it wrong, I’m probably going to be making more work for myself in the long run.

Do I tackle the obvious issues like perspective?  Should I tweak the plot? Look at the Active/passive sentence structure?

Maybe there isn’t a right way.  They are all going to have to be addressed at some point.

It feels like I should address any plot issues first, as this will involve re-writing portions of the story.  It seems daft to polish the prose, only to bin them for a piece that tightens the plot.

Do you have a way that works for you?

Reality Vs Iain: The fight back

You may recall my run in with reality, where it decided to make a point by showing that falling satellites don’t leave half a mile wide craters, and therefore can’t be used as a means of creating terror.

This left me with a problem with the plot of the new MS I was about to start.  You can imagine the scenario:-

 

Bad Guys : Do what we say, or we’ll crash satellites into your cities.

World Governments: No!  We’re issuing our townsfolk with hard hats, so there!

Bad Guys: Damn!

 

As you can see, it’d be a rather short story.

Reality 1 – Iain 0

Now for the good news, where I tell Reality to stop mucking me about, and go and pick on someone else’s plot. 

There are anti-satellite satellites.  Various military parties have looked into being able to take out satellites by parking their own satellite, which is packed full of explosives, next to their target and then blowing it up.  If the bad guys were to cause these to crash into a city, then I’m sure that there would be a mile wide crater. 

Reality 1 – Iain 1

The good bit is, that Reality can’t contradict me, as these are all top secret satellites, and officially don’t exist.

Reality 1 – Iain 2

After Reality had stuck its nose into my story and told me that I couldn’t use this idea, I was forced to start dreaming up a new idea.  I started brainstorming (ok, it was just storming) and I came up with a new outline for a book.  This means that I now have a sequel, and a follow on from that.

Reality 1 – Iain 3

I think it’s time to quit giving Reality a hard time now, before it decides to get its own back.

 

P.S. I apologise if it’s your plot that Reality has picked on instead.

It's good and bad.

I’m suffering from mixed emotions at the moment. 

I’ve started re-reading the first draft of Odd Squad that I completed the other week,

So far, barring a few minor tweaks, the plot is standing up to scrutinisation.  The peaks and troughs of the tension and emotional journeys are clear enough that the reader is being carried along the path.  So far there doesn’t seem to be too much that needs to be chopped out as being superfluous (with the exception of the first chapter, which starts in the wrong place.) 

The quality of writing, however, needs some major work.  There’s far too much passive text, and the perspective jumps from character to character like a moth in a room full of candles.

 

This is where the mixed emotions fit in:

The work required to tidy up the text is going to be long, slow and arduous.  It’s made me realise how far I still need to go to be able to turn out something that’s half decent.

On the other hand, I can see what needs to be done.  I’ve obviously learnt how to spot the issues, and have some idea what is required to improve it.