I just wanted to say thank you to all my blogging pals.
This revision game we're all playing has been incredibly inspirational, and without knowing it, you've helped me make mine better.
I realised that there's a plot flaw.
Well, actually, there isn't a flaw. And that's the flaw. It's too linear. No dead ends, or false trails. My hero works out where the trail leads, and they follow the clues.
I've now got a whole new chapter to write, and probably 2.
THANK YOU!!! :o)