Monday, 14 November 2011

Edit update

There is a bit in my MS (one of many) where I wasn't overly happy with the event that occurred.  The actions weren't fully explained and as it stood, they couldn't be explained.  This morning, I realised that it didn't have to be this way, and when I re-wrote it, I managed to add an innocent seeming cause for the event that will become sharply apparent in the third book I'm planning.  I have to admit, that I'm feeling rather smug at the moment.


  1. Way to go Iain! I think that's so great.

  2. Whoo-hoo! Yay for you! It is so important to get those little bits fixed up! Good job!

  3. Thanks Abby. It's all taking shape slowly :o)