Monday 14 November 2011

Edit update

There is a bit in my MS (one of many) where I wasn't overly happy with the event that occurred.  The actions weren't fully explained and as it stood, they couldn't be explained.  This morning, I realised that it didn't have to be this way, and when I re-wrote it, I managed to add an innocent seeming cause for the event that will become sharply apparent in the third book I'm planning.  I have to admit, that I'm feeling rather smug at the moment.
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  1. i'm erin.14 November 2011 at 19:49

    Way to go Iain! I think that's so great.

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  2. Iain14 November 2011 at 20:04

    Thanks Erin. :o)

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  3. Abby Fowers14 November 2011 at 21:24

    Whoo-hoo! Yay for you! It is so important to get those little bits fixed up! Good job!

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  4. Iain14 November 2011 at 21:55

    Thanks Abby. It's all taking shape slowly :o)

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